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Started listening to Cybrosis

It's really good. Very well-put-together, good voice acting and story progression, and believable technology, which is pretty darn important in this kind of story. Most of it feels like a natural progression of familiar contemporary tech, so it's very believable. The only thing I can criticize is that occationally the dialouge sounds a little forced, usually when "big words" are used, words that you normally don't use in conversation. I heard the word "pedantic" used in an exchange between two characters and it just rang false to me. People don't commonly use that word in casual conversation, they say things like "tight-ass" or "knitpicking" instead. Still, I'm really digging the story and the storytelling.

**Conjunction Junction, what's your function? No seriously, I slept through grammar class, so I have no idea what you do.**