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Dude, you knocked it out of the park!
The way you acted each character, your inflections on certain words, it was all almost exactly like I heard it in my head as I was writing it. Excellent job A-Mo (that's my rap-name for you, BTW)!
I hope everyone enjoyed the story as much as I enjoyed writing it. I had the ending of this tale rolling around in my head for a long time, and it took some work to build the story backwards from there. I really like the idea of finding out that the most unassuming character is actually a secret badass. I saw that kind of thing in the army, where the biggest braggart in the unit would go to pieces at the first sign of things going sideways, while the little blond chick who clerks for the Batallion Commander comes back from the field with a leg full of shrapnel and a spear full of scalps. Mad, huge, superfly bomb-shit props to our boy Arioch for bringing this story to life. I hope this motivates my fellow Junkies to start submitting stories for Tuesday Terror. Come on, I know ya'll are a bunch of sick & twisted mo-fo's, just tap into your inner-FDO and crank the Crazy up to 11.
Personally, I would love to hear a story about Dew and Perry going fishing, like if Contagious had ended differently and [SPOILERS REDACTED BY THE DIRECTOR OF DØØM.] Now I just know that someone out there can run with that comedy gold.
I am crazier than a padded room full of Charlie Mansons!
Sgt. Renee Jordan PUMC, PUV James Keeling