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You wrote an awesome story.
Thanks for your compliment on the voices. I'm glad you liked them. The author thinking I did well on their story is the highest praise I can receive. I did have to split your tale in half; there was no way I could read all 5000 words and keep consistent on the voices. I thought I might have slipped some doing 2500, but I thought cutting it down to thirds would make the pieces too small.
I can only make one person happy each day. Sorry, today's not your day. Tomorrow's not looking so good either.