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The original!

This was the first fanfic I read on this site. Loved it in the forums, and loved it in the podcast. Great job, OgreOregon!

Arioch, I had one suggestion - I thought it might feel a little more genuine if the answering machine messages had the introductory text (like you read) and then a BEEEEP indicating the message is beginning and then once again at the end. Since the story uses a couple of different types of communication methods, I thougth it might help differentiate. Not that it's important to the story, but I think it's one of those production value-adds that would make it feel more organic.

My $0.02. Loved it!

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