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Thanks, John. Constructive criticism is invaluable.
I wasn't sure about the accents, but I knew I slipped into a different narrative voice towards the end of Part 1. Please let me know if you think the problem got better, worse or stayed the same after you hear Part 2 and I'll go from there.
I can only make one person happy each day. Sorry, today's not your day. Tomorrow's not looking so good either.