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Great interpretation of the characters
But there is one sopt that puts it over-the-top for me. The part where Magnus looks at his knife an says "I know you" to it... that's a difficult bit to pull off without it sounding cheesy or contrived, and these guys pretty near nailed it. Got closer than anyone else, anyway. I wish I could have entered the contest because I had a baller idea for this script. Turn it on it's head by having the actors be women, and at that "I know you" line, have Mag drag the blade across his (her) arm with an orgasmic shudder. That would lend creedence to Clayton's following line about Mag being crazy. One other little addition would be when Mag goes to cut off the finger, have the character stop beside Clayton, look over at a workbench that has some scattered tools on it, including a pair of chickes scissors, then exchange the knife for the scissors & do the cutting with those. Just a little homage to Scary Perry Dawsey.
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