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Great job Scott! One

Great job Scott! One nitpick- your narration describes the snowmobile reaching 50 mph as if that's a fast speed- it's actually an easy cruising speed on groomed trails through wooded areas, and quite slow for any soft of motivated riding. These machines (esp the kind Magnus would crave) can do well over 100 mph, which would be more realistic and would make it even more hair raising in the novel. Keep up the great work! Scott