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Infected ReviewHe makes some odd comments. For starters, who is to say that a protagonist has to be sympathetic? I personally enjoy stories where the protagonist is someone you dislike, this brings about emotions such as: Joy or Smugness when they get their comeuppance. Also, as mentioned on twitter; he seems to dislike your intensity. Again, I see nothing wrong with that, a good novel in my opinion has to have a certain level of intensity and pace otherwise I'm tempted to leave it and move on to something else with a view to coming back to it, which invariable doesn't always happen. Take the rough with the smooth FDO, your legion of Junkies will not be dampened by such mad ramblings.