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I love how you piece your stories
It gives a slow building up to the tension, and I'm never entirely sure what's important or where you're going.
I didn't notice the fan, but that might be because it's in sync with my own computer fan. Your moblie recording gear kinda gives your reading an old-school Earthcore feel. It makes me more afraid for the people on the PUV James Keeling.
"we apologize for the inconvenience"