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Well, after listening to Nocturnal 38 and reading this

  I seem to agree with the majority sentiment. Go ahead an do a second version, but do NOT attempt to consolidate it all into some hybrid bastardization. However, if you go ahead with this, I do think it's imperative that you make an obvious distinction on the cover somehow. Something like "Rookie Jr. for the YA one of maybe have one of those red censored blocks over it. 

  As far as the message you send to the world's spawn, you generally do a damn good job. I'm in the midst of the tree ware version of Infected and had to stop and admire the subtlety with which you demonstrated the value of freedom in Chapter 29 while Dew is talking to his daughter. Most people only think freedom is important for themselves, not other folks and you used that situation to realistically illustrate how that's a load of crap.

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