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PG-13 version of Rookie

Does the publishing industry make alternate versions (R versus PG13) of books? If an alternate version (or re-write) helps to rack up more dominance in the bookstores and brings in more cash to buy more tanks/ammunition/robot drones for the coming Sigler army, then you have to say it would be worth some tweaks to the original story. The language doesn't make that story as much as the character development and awesome story universe.