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Wow,,,the end rocked and aside from calling saviour by the wrong name, it went flawlessly. Too bad about saviour though, i really wanted him to kill first born, Scotty, you should have put the arrow in the fucker's eye instead of the shoulder.
About the printed version, that is fully supported, but don't cut nothing out. I think you should print 2 or even three books, you can even spice up the scenes and put in more action, and or course more more blood.
Oh, and you need to tie up the story about marie latrell. I really want to know where she came from and if there are more like her. Can't wait for the sequels.
Commander: Foreign Mission Battalion
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