@angelrun1 active 2 months, 4 weeks ago
First, I want to say thank You for all your hard work this year…. Nocturnal is great! I love the idea that you ask for fan input. And there are many great ideas posted here….
I agree with the need for more background and DO NOT kill Robin. I think Bryan (and the readers) should be constantly be wondering if she will survive. You could even have some of the characters watching over her while she lays in critical condition during Bryan’s battle…have her and Bryan take the baby from Aggie to raise.
I think the chief should have two girls but one is adopted… or the chief is a Zed and she passed the Zed onto one of the twins.
What happens when the Zeds have children?
There is definitely a need for some strong female characters….maybe the old savior or Jessup could be changed.
I still don’t understand how the boats got underground or what information was found out about Maria when Mr. Smith did research.
How tall was First Born? I thought he was 6”10 but in one episode you said he was over 7 feet tall. His description is too vague…. all I got was he was a big tall strong person that could jump.
What was the urine thing? Marking of territory? An act of humiliation?
Do their capes smell like urine so they could keep humans away? Is it a male pheromone thing?
Do u know there are tribes where the females urinate on the male teen boys as part of the right of passage ritual?
The groom walk….sorry it was silly. Not the idea but letting loose a bunch of kids with a fork and a knife…. all I could think of was “chuckie”. If the ritual is to teach them to hunt then maybe have a few of the older kids surround and overpower the prey and then the little kids could come out with the forks and knives….they could be cheering or chanting in the background….
You Rock! I am a junkie…. I have only recently been introduced to the world of podiobooks (although I have been listening to audio books for MANY years) and I have to let u know I listened to your story because your arch nemesis recommended it…. on his podcast.