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PRVT john b bennett…..1/28/20……. 1?

  • Avatar of john bennett

    i just got my laeve.not only laeve,but birthday leave.

    my true 18 bitrhday,crnl BEENE had stepped in two days ago as he had done every year for the past three years,"every one new "i was not 21but no one cared.

    abbott,renfro,and myself went out on the town,well what kind of out we could do wasent very mutch at all  we had some drinks played a round of laser toss.

    The withrit was not set up for a land walker,or eEEeeEE eeeeeee

    as they would say,the planetary union would use this out post as a rec out post,

    yea it is preaty,even breath taking,but the only reason were here haveing it so easy here is because it’s so safe here,thats what everyone said.

    3/4 through a lap dance my friends got me,the screamer yelled and loud.

    we all got up and ran this was no drill it was the real thing, we ran,i was preaty buzzed

    and when i came to a juction i sliped and fell,thats when i met navel officer nathan wells,we kindda hit each other  at the intersection .we helped each other up, he looked at me,and said TEXAS isaid "sir yes sir" he asked me what vessal i was on i told him the texoma hesaid you wont make it,follow me i yelled at my friends,they ran to me we follow spclst wells to his ship that was 2min away,we ran inside.

    he yelled that he was the last,they closed up and rockets blasted.before i could say anything in protest,he got on comms and called the Texoma and called out our names to his counterpart on the other end.then yelled at him the to take off in thirty seconeds and no less,the time to invasion was wrong "what did he say,invasion"i sat and whatched out the forward display "invasion"? what,who where,what i knew was NOW.as he sat a brite light then another then four more untill there was atleast 85 or more pinholes growing,then there they where a shit load of the most crazest ships i have seen.they  didnt even slow down for us,lil guys.they came in hard and fast as they past us we turned on the aft veiw what i saw made me cry,weep,wale.

    it looked like the were there to plant mushrooms and they unleashed pure hell.that was when i stoped writing home for a year.10 seconds to extenction,thats all it took

    10 seconds.i didnt talk for a week,no one made me.

    Avatar of Pons Matal

    I’m looking forward to the next birthday!

    “I can’t tell if that’s funny or really scary.”

    Avatar of michelle mcmichael

    very good!  i have found myself checking for your stuff!

    Avatar of Jordan Willis

    I can’t wait to read/hear more.

    G-Man

    Yeah, mind-bottling. You know, when things are so crazy it gets your thoughts all trapped, like in a bottle? – Chazz Micheal Micheals

    Avatar of john bennett

    hell if it taste like chicken,bring me chicken!

                                                        rodney carigton

    Avatar of Pons Matal

     Thank the good looking Junkie complimenting you writing! :)

    “I can’t tell if that’s funny or really scary.”

    Avatar of Wolf

    At least now we know that he has good taste! 

    ..No Bounce..

    …No Play…

    Avatar of Pons Matal

    “I can’t tell if that’s funny or really scary.”

    Avatar of john bennett

    hell if it taste like chicken,bring me chicken!

                                                        rodney carigton

    Avatar of Justin Crumpler

    Great stuff so far, I like how some of the bits were "snuck in" other topics too.  Kind of gives it that crypt "glitch" feel.  Keep it up.

    Avatar of Shirley Bruce

    Sounds good so far Red. 

    "Even crazy people sometimes base their fiction on an ounce of truth" -S. Sigler

    Avatar of michelle mcmichael

    thanks yall just made my daySmile

    Avatar of john bennett

    secure the town he said!

    the res’s will not be hoslite he said! 

    WHAT THE HELL…EVER!

    we were at a med sized city named remmlake city on rodina.

    the P.U has "liberated" the planet and put a sizable force on it.

    well they were not here they were 1278 miles away setting up a beach head,and this task was"no problem" and 20 men and one donut truck should do.

    when we got there the city was..well basicly a poorly constructed intercetion, 15 med/small buildings some roads,large croplands,

    hell if it wernt for the 4 winged …..bat/rats around and the bright orange plants being harvested it could be a farm in texas.

    we got into the middle of i  guess a market square,i saw a rag clad human male scurry between two buildings he had a weapon

    i yealled GUN.YUP i opened a large can of fuck up when i said that,the srg hit the deploy button and BAM the automated service mule droped the donut and shut down.

    there we were 6 men sit smack dab in the middle of town

    our complement was 15 miles away holding another township

    (pling pling pling pling) a hole clip had just slamed the side

    BOOM BOOM a cloud of fire and dust

    abbott winked at me ,he was straped in the gun chair hands ready he yealled fuck you bennett your it,then shot i mean POPPED up fast as hell,gun chair blazing.he cleared about 300 rounds then back down

    i looked at renfro and said DAMIT FFFUUUCKK IM IT!!!

    he laugh at me i walked in the small encloser in ..well a circle

    at that moment a frack grenade landded at me feet.

    well at that moment i reached down winked at renfro and threw the grenade and said your it.shards of metal flying overhead and renfro cussing and the others laughing at him.we couldent hear abbot yell "all clear"

    renfro yelled at me and called me a fucker he hoped up on the top of the donut and unloaded a whole clip into a house.

    he got back down we were laughing so hard that i told him he didnt wink and that the all clear had been called,he was still it

    a week of desert rashons were forfit,this was a good birthday 

    Avatar of Jordan Willis

    good job kep em coming….please?

    G-Man

    "Why didn’t you stay in the car?"

    "It’s never safe in the car!"

    Avatar of john bennett

    hell if it taste like chicken,bring me chicken!

                                                        rodney carigton

    Avatar of john bennett

    hell if it taste like chicken,bring me chicken!

                                                        rodney carigton

    Avatar of john bennett

    hell if it taste like chicken,bring me chicken!

                                                        rodney carigton

    Avatar of Pons Matal

    Your doing a great job for someone whose never written before. Give us more Pvt Bennett!!

    “I can’t tell if that’s funny or really scary.”

    Avatar of Nathan Wells

    Nate Dogg… The only signature I need is my fist.

    Avatar of Pons Matal

    I cant believe It didn’t register! I guess that what happens when I just think of everyone by their screen names!

    “I can’t tell if that’s funny or really scary.”

    Avatar of Wolf

    and an officer, no less! See what an education will get you! 

    ..No Bounce..

    …No Play…

    Avatar of Jordan Willis

    now I know.

    G-Man

    He’s like Gandhi! But better – he likes puppets!

    Avatar of john bennett

    hell if it taste like chicken,bring me chicken!

                                                        rodney carigton

    Avatar of john bennett

    hell if it taste like chicken,bring me chicken!

                                                        rodney carigton

    Avatar of john bennett

    hell if it taste like chicken,bring me chicken!

                                                        rodney carigton

    Avatar of john bennett

    hell if it taste like chicken,bring me chicken!

                                                        rodney carigton

    Avatar of Pons Matal

    “I can’t tell if that’s funny or really scary.”

    Avatar of J.P.

    N8, you never fail to meet the low standard you set for yourself…

    – “The adverb is not your friend.” -Stephen King, “On Writing”

    Avatar of Pons Matal

    got anything you can share? I’m needing a Pvt Bennett Red smack!

    “[No matter where you go, there you are] – And Sigler knows exactly where there is! ”

    Avatar of john bennett

    driving long miles doesnt make the ink flo 

    hell if it taste like chicken,bring me chicken!

                                                        rodney carigton

    Avatar of Wolf

    At least get to the point where Officer Nathan Wells gets kiled!! 

    ..No Bounce..

    …No Play…

    Avatar of john bennett

    hell if it taste like chicken,bring me chicken!

                                                        rodney carigton

    Avatar of Pons Matal

     Killing n8 ought to be a top priority. Have him killed off just right about the time he loses his, uhmm…..Innocence, yeah his innocence thats the ticket! No offense n8…..

    “[No matter where you go, there you are] – And Sigler knows exactly where there is! ”

    Avatar of Wolf

    It’s going to be hard enuff for me to get to DC 

    ..No Bounce..

    …No Play…

    Avatar of john bennett

    hell if it taste like chicken,bring me chicken!

                                                        rodney carigton

    Avatar of john bennett

    poor lil tink tink

    Avatar of Donte bair

    You know one thing live forever that is ture… remeber it forever….

    Acai Force Max

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