Scott
THE STARTER: What sub-plots are you looking for? FDO™ wants to know

Junkies, if you're reading this, it's because you're in deep here at scottsigler.com. You are the die-hards, the regulars. I'm working on THE STARTER as we speak, and I want to know what story elements you want to see.

Of course Quentin will continue looking for his family. That's a given. But what other sub-plots caught your interest? For example: 

  • What will happen with Quentin spurning the offer of the Jupiter Jacks? 
  • Is Yassoud's gambling habit going to cause issues?
  • Will Gredok punish Quentin for the human's insubordination? 
Here's your spot to wonder aloud. No plot point is too small to discuss here.

 

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Re: THE STARTER: What sub-plots are you looking for? FDO™ wants to know

 Going to stay on the team as backup and mentor to QB

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Scott
Re: THE STARTER: What sub-plots are you looking for? FDO™ wants to know
Don Pine is still on the roster. Word from his agent is that he is reporting to training camp, although the rumor mill says that Krakens head coach Hokor the Hookchest is going to name Quentin Barnes as the starting quarterback for the season opener against the Isis Ice Storm. 
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Re: THE STARTER: What sub-plots are you looking for? FDO™ wants to know

I would be interested in seeing more of the behind the scene politics of football. Things like holdouts, contract negotiations and determining who is the league MVP. Also, can you bring Pookie Chang forward in time to be an announcer/sports commentator for the league? :o)

 

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gupie1
Re: THE STARTER: What sub-plots are you looking for? FDO™ wants to know

I would like to see some more of Quentin's background.  Maybe something with his parents or distant relative that tries to influence him to do what they want for their benifit not because they want a relationship.

 

NeilColquhoun
Re: THE STARTER: What sub-plots are you looking for? FDO™ wants to know

Glad that Don Pine is gonna be in the book, but to what extent? Will he taking on a coaching role? Mentoring the youngsters and acting as a mediator between the different races who make up the team? 

NeilColquhoun
Re: THE STARTER: What sub-plots are you looking for? FDO™ wants to know

I think that we should not find out too much about Quentin's family too soon.

There's plenty of time - maybe a hint here and there. 

tsolo888
Re: THE STARTER: What sub-plots are you looking for? FDO™ wants to know

I really enjoy the interplay between the different species and how that is resolved on the field and off...Tsolo888 <AKA Cpt. Travis Ellis> - Out

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Re: THE STARTER: What sub-plots are you looking for? FDO™ wants to know
Hi how about a church to Quentin starting and the purist nation disowning him?
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Re: THE STARTER: What sub-plots are you looking for? FDO™ wants to know

I would love to hear more about the ruggedly handsome and extremely charismatic head coach of The Wabash WolfPack. I mean, it’s been 14 years since they’ve won the Galaxy Bowl and I, for one, think they are due and more than deserve to make another run at the title. They have a 1-1 record against the Ionath Krakens and it’s time to settle once and for all which one is the better team.  We all know that it comes down to coaching. And the Leader of The WolfPack is undeniably a better coach than that fur ball Quyth, Hokor the Hook-Chest, ever thought about being.

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BigJohn
Re: THE STARTER: What sub-plots are you looking for? FDO™ wants to know

Some of the science of The Crypt applied to the GFL. Maybe something like Mitchell Fayed's brain being put into a cloned body, or a Heavy-G body or something like that. Not technically a body mod, so probably legal by Creterakian standards, but maybe not very ethical.

I'd also like to see the conquest of a new race that results in a new type of player, that may end up squeezing out an established race's foothold. For instance, something that jumps higher than Sklorno, or is harder to move around than Ki. Perhaps ideally, some newly conquered race that is ideally suited to the (seemingly) human-dominated quarterback position.

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Rockto3.14
Re: THE STARTER: What sub-plots are you looking for? FDO™ wants to know
I'm curious what potential confrontations will arise from Quentin refusing to throw games as part of a deal to join the To Pirates...
Scott
Re: THE STARTER: What sub-plots are you looking for? FDO™ wants to know
Pete, this church is already brewing in Sklorno space. I agree, it would be interesting to see how this church grows alongside Quentin's career. 
MuchAdo
Re: THE STARTER: What sub-plots are you looking for? FDO™ wants to know

to be the beginning of a romance between Barnes and Scarborough. :-)

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BigJohn
Re: THE STARTER: What sub-plots are you looking for? FDO™ wants to know

More terrorist consequences from Purist Nation attacks. I don't recall my timeline exactly, but if there's as much Purist Nation terrorism going around as it seems from The Crypt, I would have a hard time believing they wouldn't target such a massive affront to their religion as the multi-species media bonanza that is the GFL.

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tsolo888
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Re: THE STARTER: What sub-plots are you looking for? FDO™ wants to know

Assuming there is a papparazi in the Rookie universe, wouldn't it be possible that the tabloids would be all over the new Starter? Even more so, the tabloids would love to run stories of a romantic trist after a drunken night out. Now, lets say there is an article printed showing some kind of relationship between Quinten and  another race, heavy G or blue skin for example.

This would enfuriate the purest nation because one of thier own is loving one of the sub-races. This rumor could cause hate and possibly death threats to our hero.  

Just saying that interspecies intercouse could be possible.Wink

bconklin
Re: THE STARTER: What sub-plots are you looking for? FDO™ wants to know

There is the standard offence vs. defence rivalries that do exisit.  However as an old offensive tackle, there were the running backs I wanted to block till my legs broke then there was the glory grabbing a$$es that I wanted to let the Defensive tackle right on by to knock the running back to the dirt.  Many times there was the one reciver who would score a touchdown after the o-line would give 8-9-10-11 seconds of solid pocket protection, you would get the "look what I did".

So I would like to see some inter-team skill positions(Glorry Grabbing) vs. line (get it done) positions. 

Brett

w_nightshade
Re: THE STARTER: What sub-plots are you looking for? FDO™ wants to know

The relationship between Barnes and Greedok got sprained pretty hard at the end of the Rookie.  I think that has to develop. 

I also think that Quentin would probably get into a bad relationship at this stage, learn a bit about what NOT to look for in a woman.

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Re: THE STARTER: What sub-plots are you looking for? FDO™ wants to know

 Glancing through some of the ideas below, I love the idea of Quentin dating interacially. I think him dating a Sklorno is pushing his character a bit far, but you've already foreshadowed his attraction to blue skinned females. The reaction of the Purist nation to that could create some awesome tension/conflict.

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tsolo888
Re: THE STARTER: What sub-plots are you looking for? FDO™ wants to know

I would be surprised if the FDO hasn't already formulated this story line. ...Tsolo888 <AKA Cpt. Travis Ellis> - Out

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Re: THE STARTER: What sub-plots are you looking for? FDO™ wants to know
I like the idea of "Interspecific Siglerotica" and I think a brief tryst between a main character and cheerleader would satisfy my urges. Or maybe one main character and multiple cheerleaders (and multiple species).
Insignificant_Blood_Splatter
Re: THE STARTER: What sub-plots are you looking for? FDO™ wants to know

Wow. There are some really interesting ideas in this thread. I think my favorite would have to be more backstory to the John/Ju competition, but I like all the ideas. Though I'm not sure about dating. In Tier 1, would the team still be traveling a lot? I think maybe a fling or one night stand or something might be more realistic (of course, still with another race - I like the idea of a blue-skinned girl). But that's just me. As for any other sub-plots - ... I'm drawing a blank. I'll have to think on it. xD

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Scott
Re: THE STARTER: What sub-plots are you looking for? FDO™ wants to know
Do I have to stop this car? There is no such thing as "Siglerotica" and there never will be. And there sure isn't going to be any interspecies Siglerotica!!
Scott
Re: THE STARTER: What sub-plots are you looking for? FDO™ wants to know
Hell yeah, I agree with this and have been looking forward to showing more of John Tweedy for years. He's awesome, one of my favorite characters. Maybe we will see why he and his brother hate each other so much!
Scott
Re: THE STARTER: What sub-plots are you looking for? FDO™ wants to know
BConklin, this is good stuff. I think I actually created the Krakens without any glory hogs on the team. Who knows? Maybe the early success will go to Quentin's head. Heck, pro football success going to a kid's head? That would never happen in real life. 
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