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Alright new topic for the New Infected
What did you think of the new Infected Prologue and Chapter 1?  Personally, I loved it.  It rocked.  The original ws interesting from a clinical how it spreads perspective, but was pretty slow, and it took awhile to get into the story.  I like this one much better... More Dew....  What did everyone think?  Compare/Contrast if you can to the original Infection...

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ogreoregon
Re: Alright new topic for the New Infected

It leads you in with a nice scary scene and puts things in a clearer timeline setup...... it is very clear that they(Dew) KNOW what is happening even if the victims and the audience don't.  I like Having Dew introduced this way, he is one of the more important people in the overall saga.  It was clearer and more inticing.

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SynapticJam
Re: Alright new topic for the New Infected

It was much better to have the science lesson in a later chapter... 

 

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mumo00
Re: Alright new topic for the New Infected
i agree. i really like how sigs throws you right into the fire from the start
enahz
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the new prologe adds so much more detail about the events beofre perry being infected. loving the new changes makes it feel like we have grown with the book. was skeptical before listening to to it as i still have infection saved but look forward to listening to infected all over again. all round postive
SynapticJam
Re: Alright new topic for the New Infected

All that editing and re-writing reallly improved the story... 

 

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treed
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  • good gawd almighty, been teaching too long........ need a break

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rivarij99
Re: Alright new topic for the New Infected
I wouldn't mind seeing Dew as the main character in future book. Perfectly introduced.
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SynapticJam
Re: Alright new topic for the New Infected

Man with a checkered past...  skilled....  It would be cool to see him revisited... 

 

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