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It leads you in with a nice scary scene and puts things in a clearer timeline setup...... it is very clear that they(Dew) KNOW what is happening even if the victims and the audience don't. I like Having Dew introduced this way, he is one of the more important people in the overall saga. It was clearer and more inticing.
*** I am Renfield to Sigler's Dracula ***
It was much better to have the science lesson in a later chapter...
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All that editing and re-writing reallly improved the story...
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- good gawd almighty, been teaching too long........ need a break
- Numbers are the keys that unlock the universe...
- http://www.pgholyfield.com/maah/
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The Math God of the Past
THE Mister Biz-Nass, Your friendly neighborhood Tourette-Syndrome-afflicted, throat-cancer-surviving fortune-teller who speaks through a voice box.
The Past Future gay Chief of the SFPD (the original podcast of Nocturnal)
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Man with a checkered past... skilled.... It would be cool to see him revisited...
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